biography of Amanda George

WALT: write a biography


We wrote biographies because we are learn about our families.
We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in our family.


Amanda Ethnee George is the best mum ever !!!!

Amanda george is my mum she was born on the 30th of april 1988
Amanda george worked at milking cows.
Amanda georges favorite food is bacon. 

 Amanda's first school was Oroua Downs. 

 Amanda's favorite color is pink. Amanda is thirty-one

When Amanda stated working on the dairy farm as a teenager she would always get the farm vehicles stuck in the mud. It was very funny.


2 stars: Spelling and writing.
Wish: Write more.

Spilling and writing.

Write more.

my family

WALT: organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My Family

My sister is called Marley. Every week she goes to seashells she is funny crazy and silly and she is 4.

My dad is called Josh. he  works at  Cassidy he has nice parents and he is nice to. he is really good at work he builds houses.

My mum is called Amanda. She works at  seashells her  work involves taking care of kids She is Very nice her favourite colour is pink and she is cool.

My pet is called Shelby.  a long time ago she got caught by a dog. The dog caught her tail My Friends gave  Shelby to me we had to cut her tail off.

Reflection:
Two things I did well were writing my keywords and putting my ideas into paragraphs.  Next time I want to work more on writing interesting sentences.