WALT: use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.
The stripy zebra is staring anxiously at the grass.
"Nau Mai haere mai -I am in a Year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School and my teacher is Miss van der Voort. Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
you chose a very cool picture to insert on to your blog and that is what caught my eye.
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Hi katie it is your blog buddy who sent this comment to you I enjoyed reading your interesting sentences.I learnt that you were learning about making your sentences better.maybe you could make your sentences make more sense.
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