creating complex sentences

WALT: use conjunction to create complex sentences.


we created this to show complex  sentences we worked on with our buddy and to show off our this is my favourite.

This is my favourite one because it makes sens.

biography of Amanda George

WALT: write a biography


We wrote biographies because we are learn about our families.
We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in our family.


Amanda Ethnee George is the best mum ever !!!!

Amanda george is my mum she was born on the 30th of april 1988
Amanda george worked at milking cows.
Amanda georges favorite food is bacon. 

 Amanda's first school was Oroua Downs. 

 Amanda's favorite color is pink. Amanda is thirty-one

When Amanda stated working on the dairy farm as a teenager she would always get the farm vehicles stuck in the mud. It was very funny.


2 stars: Spelling and writing.
Wish: Write more.

Spilling and writing.

Write more.

how to make amazing sentences

WALT: use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.

The stripy zebra is staring anxiously at the grass.

 
The tree is moving, it is seaweed swishing in the water.
The sun winked at me.

two stars and a wish making 3 sentences.

Family Story Animation

We have been learning about our families. We have been learning the stories of our families. We

We have been learning about our families.

We have been learning the stories of our familie.

We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides.

We have been learning to record using Screencastify.

we created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special stories from our families

Two things  I think I did well are making my Animation and videoing too

Next time I would like to find a background

do you like what you see?

my family

WALT: organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time.

My Family

My sister is called Marley. Every week she goes to seashells she is funny crazy and silly and she is 4.

My dad is called Josh. he  works at  Cassidy he has nice parents and he is nice to. he is really good at work he builds houses.

My mum is called Amanda. She works at  seashells her  work involves taking care of kids She is Very nice her favourite colour is pink and she is cool.

My pet is called Shelby.  a long time ago she got caught by a dog. The dog caught her tail My Friends gave  Shelby to me we had to cut her tail off.

Reflection:
Two things I did well were writing my keywords and putting my ideas into paragraphs.  Next time I want to work more on writing interesting sentences.

the legend of Mangonui

WALT: share a story using google slides

ALL ABOUT ME

love my mum because I said “mum” for the first time when I was a baby.

I remember when I was 4 I had a swing it broke the next day I cried and I ran to mum and said “oh please” It is my favourite swing, it is blue. I asked dad to fix my swing.

A fun fact about me is that I like tigers.

Joey makes me laugh.